Peer Editing Skills

Remember to be kindly critical and honest. 

1.  What do you think is the strongest part of the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design, the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so strong?

 

 1. I think that the strongest part of the blog is the introduction to herself and the picture that goes with it, the reason that I  think this is because the style of writing makes it seem that it is her deepest and darkest thoughts that are finally getting  and are be able to be said. I think that this is effective because of the picture it shows her in a nicer light and when she was happy which is in contrast to when she left the school feeling upset. This makes the element strong because its showing Alex for who she really is and not who other people see her as it also shows that she is like any other normal human being and wants to be treated that way.

2.  Is there a part of the blog you find confusing? A part that doesn’t seem to quite match the rest or the character for which it was designed? A link for which you don’t understand the connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?

 

 2. I do there is a part of the blog that doesn't make sense every upload to the blog has had something to do with A lex and her life, or how she feels about jospeh choosing not to do the exhibition nothing is out of character or random which also makes the blog more realistic and enjoyable.

3.  After reading the blog, what would you like to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.

 

 3.The two questions that I have are:
 .  How did you feel when Joesph said he wasn't going to do the exhibition and what are you plannning to do to change his mind?
 .  How did you feel living in a bedsit with strangers, why didnt you just go home?

4.  Did you notice any major misspellings or grammatical issues? Please note down anything.

There was few mispellings and grammatically incorrect issues such as:  now. what this is incorrect as after the full stop there should be capital letter. Another issue is not! guess  After the exclamation mark there should be a capitial letter.

5.  Did your partner fulfil all the requirements on the Character Blog Requirements handout?

If not, which one or ones still need to be added?

Most of the requirements have been fulfilled to great standard. However they are yet to fill out the peer editing and the skills bank.


Overall Chloe's blog was really amazing and I learnt so much about the character Alex from reading her blog and learnt about the characters deepest, darkest thoughts and how she really feels about everything that goes on inside her.